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Artist's Comments

"....this is the skin of a killer bella"

i know the horse is not sparkle, sparkle like Edward does, but its not supose to be just like it, i just got inspiration from that line in the movie, but it would be cool to make a sparkling horsei! lol

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EDIT: I took advice from =Serephinex and made the main fuller and darkened the trees a bit. I think it looks better now! Thanks hun!

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Credits
Horse: ~fahlaemee-stock
Background: I need to quit doing this, but I thought I had it :+fav: but I dont and I do not remember where I got, so you know what to do! lol
Everything else =jendee

Critiques


:iconserephinex:
First off this piece is stunning. The horse, although the main figure, is not the complete centre of everything. Your eyes are able to wonder around the image, rather then being completely distracted by the main subject.

The lighting is fantastic. You can tell where it comes from not only by the shadow but the light you've added into the trees definitely adds to it. That shadow... It really shows how much attention you put towards details.

I do have two minor details to pick on...
I think the mane is a little thin and a bit sharp. If you thicken it a little bit, it may add to the image.

Secondly, after I strayed my eyes from that gorgeous horse of yours, immediately I noticed the tree to the right. If you darken it just enough, and then add the branches, I think it could really draw your eyes to a different part of the background, rather then seeing that first hand and then scanning around the image.

Overall very well done. I really love this image.
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:iconi-pondered:
Beautiful feathers :D

It's a great piece, I just wish I could see the sparkling a bit more. The picture is small :(
:iconxxfantaisiamanipsxx:
gorgeous, instant fav hun! as always ;) :)

id love to see the deatails of the horse
it's so small :(


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   Sometimes when you love someone you want to
   believe they're good

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:iconconvulsiondesigns:
Wow. I love this one! He looks like Edward did and how he feels. All upset with himself. Very good job. The whole image itself is just amazing. I love the black. -stares-
:iconjendee:
thanks

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we only have our life to live
:iconjendee:
there really arnt any details though

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we only have our life to live
:iconjendee:
thanks

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we only have our life to live
:iconserephinex:
it's too bad you lost the background link :[
Stunning!


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There are no better artists, only those who are more experienced.
:iconjcspenny:
This is amazing. I agree with ConvulsionDesigns, you definitely captured how Edward feels. :heart:

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"Don't be afraid to go after what you want to do, and what you want to be.
But don't be afraid to be willing to pay the price."

- Lane Frost
:iconserephinex:
It looks great now Jen! It looks as though the darkness is about to suck the horse in.
I envy your talent, I really do :heart:


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There are no better artists, only those who are more experienced.

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